navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Balladeer Are You Sure?
Open Poetry #29
Post A Reply Post New Topic Balladeer Are You Sure? Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-28 02:09 PM



Are You Sure?

You say you want to dance with me
Well alright -
We can boogie ogee ogee all night long.
When morning is near I will be out of whack
Cause of my sacroiliac.

You say you want to dance with me
Well alright-
We can dance like in Saturday Night Fever
or splash around like Flashdance.
When morning comes I’ll be a sneezin’
Cause the night before I was a freezin’.

You say you want to dance with me
Well.................................!
I’m really not a tease and I do try to please.
Cause if I do I’ll have a wheeze.
You understand about my back out of whack
on account of my sacroiliac.
All that water from Flashdance is a makin’
me sneeze.
That is why I have this nasty wheeze.

You say you want to dance with me.
Are You Sure?

The Chocolate Monster is in the house.

© Copyright 2003 Bonnie j - All Rights Reserved
SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
1 posted 2003-10-28 02:20 PM


like the Solid Gold dancers, right?
this was cute!

garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
2 posted 2003-10-28 08:18 PM


Bon-Bon, this is really cute. I could just see the Chocolate Monster and Balladeer dancing all around. LOL

           

(LOL  I didn't see a dancing Chocolate Monster, or a dancing Balladeer......ahahahaha!!)

Hugs to you both,  

Ethel



[This message has been edited by garysgirl (10-28-2003 08:25 PM).]

Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
3 posted 2003-10-28 09:23 PM



    

Those rumors are completely false!
I'd only like a little waltz
Or two-step to a Mathis tune..
Not jumping like a wild baboon!

    


It's hard to get a little action
When lying on a bed in traction.
That hip-hop's too hard on my hip
And tangos make my tailbone slip!



So come and place your hand in mine,
My arm around your waist - that's fine,
The other folks can watch us groove
And we don't even have to move!!!!!

    
>


[This message has been edited by Balladeer (10-28-2003 09:26 PM).]

Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
4 posted 2003-10-28 10:18 PM


Oh! My! Hahahahaha. You guys are so funny. You sure give me a laugh.
Love Bon-Bon

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-10-29 04:03 AM


LOL
Magicmystery
Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
6 posted 2003-10-29 04:42 AM


Bonnie, that was sooo cute!!!!

Sherry  


garysgirl
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
7 posted 2003-10-29 05:37 AM


Bon-Bon,  forgot about that guy that Balladeer had dancing.     LOL

Balladeer, I hope you don't mind...I snatched your dancers just in case saomebody else decides to go dancing again. LOL

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #29 » Balladeer Are You Sure?

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary