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Finding Rhythm

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Kaoru
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25 posted 10-29-2003 02:10 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Well done, indeed, Susan
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26 posted 10-29-2003 02:21 PM       View Profile for Krawdad   Email Krawdad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krawdad

A lovely and lush invite!

I like this best:

"Peel me to purity
free my fears
melt my mediocrity"
Brad Majors
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27 posted 10-30-2003 03:27 PM       View Profile for Brad Majors   Email Brad Majors   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Brad Majors

Your poetry always blows me away
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28 posted 10-30-2003 07:27 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Good place to be, and such a pretty melody you're playing.

Beautifully done Susan~
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29 posted 10-30-2003 10:04 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

pure passion
and thats what it=s all aobut
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30 posted 11-02-2003 08:08 PM       View Profile for Edder   Email Edder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Edder

i can't believe i almost missed this! beautiful susan! you do have a way...
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On A Journey To The Unknown


31 posted 11-02-2003 09:15 PM       View Profile for SmartChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit SmartChick's Home Page   View IP for SmartChick

Beautifully written!
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32 posted 11-02-2003 09:36 PM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Catch my breath
on the wind
as it passes by
whispering your name

Cup me in your comfort
seal me in your security
touch me to taboo

Feel my heart beat
as it races
to the rhythm
of your touch


Oh my, Susan....I don't know how I missed this passionate beauty the first time around. You know how much I like these romantic writes.
Hugs  
Ethel
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(psssstttttt!!! I sure hope that whoever's inspiring your writes like this keeps it up!!!!!)
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33 posted 11-03-2003 08:54 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Eddie~Thank you darling!  

Smartchick~Thank you!

Ethel~hmmmmm...my inspiration? Maybe its just a freedom from something that has been holding me down... Thank you!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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34 posted 11-03-2003 08:46 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

"See the soul
of who I become
with the words
that caress your lips"

Stop making me I'm trying to work.  


"Iím here without you baby but your still on my lonely mind
I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time"

3 Doors Down

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35 posted 11-04-2003 08:42 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Did you think I didn't notice that you added a sig?  

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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