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KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-10-28 12:05 PM


It smells like burnt feathers
Like a chicken,
Never plucked,
Cooked.


It's the end of time,
And the beginning of timeless ways
And money does not exist.

Organized religion
Becomes unorganized-
The way it was meant
To Be.

Schools are teaching the ways
Of REAL life, and how many
Are not rich,
And cannot live
On their expert food pyramid.
Like the rich ever did anyway?

Stars don't die, and more are born
Factories don't infect
And ducks' quacks DO echo.
(I don't think they ever knew
They were special.)

Racism is only a memory
And the same with
Every other ugly word
And concept
(But
That means
"Ugly" does not exist
And therefor, neither does
This paragraph.)

Dreams come true,
And wishes are fullfilled,
Because they are pure
And untainted
By evil.

But, this dream,
My dream,
Does not come true
Because
This
Is not
My Dreamworld.

[This message has been edited by KoKo (10-28-2003 12:07 AM).]

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pandonov
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
1 posted 2003-10-28 12:38 PM


neither is mine, yet would be nice for some change(just for a while though)
KoKo
Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-10-28 12:42 PM


Thanks. I appreciate the read and the comment
pandonov
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
3 posted 2003-10-28 12:44 PM


any time
Fire Fairy
Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43
Australia
4 posted 2003-10-28 01:03 AM


Its is your dreamworld sweetheart. We are the creators, and you can make a difference in this life. I was convinced I had to conform to this earthy illusion, yet I broke free, and now I fly on the wings of connectedness and wisdom. In my world of enchantment, I bring a taste of wonder to this sometimes stone cold reality.

Beautifully written... you're a very intelligent person and your views are interesting to ponder upon.

Mary Ann
Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111

5 posted 2003-10-28 05:36 AM


This is a lovely write I admire your dreamworld and wish also that reality was more like it...

God bless,

~MA~

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