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ecrivan
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0 posted 2003-10-27 11:49 PM



It was a open casket I had to greet
bodies wrapped in mystery, grave diggers did seek
to find the origins of figures like me
how I lived near fertile, now desolate Dead Sea...

as a high priest chosen to keep accounts
wrapped in soaked linen, tucked in a mount
where the briny cleft preserved my flesh
kept the record of death so very fresh....

I'd arise in angst against the robber of the tomb
who'd enter break my seal, the privacy of the room
and follow him as he laid eye on my sceptre and ankh
into the crisp night, he fled, unaware of my rank..

that I'd follow the grave robber for centuries down the road
there was n'er a single peace for his kind in any abode
cause he held those instruments which had kept my rule
now he'd be taught a lesson from a wrapped mummy's school.




[This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-28-2003 09:18 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-10-28 09:34 AM



Archeology has always intrigued me - and yet I have a deep respect for the dead and buried, and wish not to disturb the remains.  Yet...we learn so much, and science slogs on.

Interesting poem, Martin. It got my mind going off in other directions.  Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-10-28 09:40 AM


ecrivan,
Interesting write, enjoyed the read.

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-28 09:44 AM


The tone of this one is certainly in good keeping with the spooky season! lol

As I was growing up, I fancied the idea of becoming either an archeologist or a paleontologist ~ in the end I opted for a profession that worked on live bodies. Instead of bringing dead bodies to "life", I now work on preventing live bodies from becoming dead!

This was an excellent write, Dear Writer!

HHH
EA

ecrivan
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4 posted 2003-10-28 09:21 PM


Karilea,

It does us well to respect the living and the dead, yes..

Sy,

appreciate your read

Linda,

Like your wit here, yes you've chosen to work with the living..and that's not an easy job.


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