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Open Poetry #29

Past The Emptiness

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-10-27 06:47 PM

Past The Emptiness

Have you ever experienced that
feeling after your love is gone?
You know the one I mean...
Emptiness, emptiness,
emptiness to the extreme.
Perhaps only days before
your vessel was full.
But now all is spilled and
new feelings are revealed
and you feel like a fool.
Having nothing as in unoccupied.
Having no worth or purpose.
Useless and unsatisfied.
Just one touch of her caress
would fill the void of emptiness.
But you'll never feel that caress.
The feelings you will be
feeling are called emptiness.
I know well of emptiness.
Tell me that your love is gone
and I'll tell you, you must go on.
Past the caress.
Past the emptiness.

JamesLee
October27
2003

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-10-27 07:11 PM

James,
Enjoyed the write.

Mary Ann
Member

since 2003-04-23

Posts 111

2 posted 2003-10-28 06:32 AM

Heartfelt and touching

God bless,

~MA~

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

3 posted 2003-10-28 06:34 AM

Yes, and the space can remain a lifetime
but it gets filled with life
Enjoyed reading

Liz

ShakespearesSister
Junior Member

since 2003-10-14

Posts 24

4 posted 2003-10-28 06:43 AM

I have, but is soon filled with a new love.

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