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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-10-27 05:37 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

Life for me has been so busy
I don't have time like I once had
But I often stop and think about you
For I still miss you so much Dad

My poetry gives me strength
As I go about my day
There are friends I can rely on
They keep my sadness at bay

I often walk along the beach
Where I stop and think of you
I search the sapphire sky
Hoping you might come into view

As I sit amongst my thoughts
I reach inside my memories
I often see you in the stars
And feel your warmth in the breeze

It's been four years since I lost you
But your image remains so clear
Through my words I try to reach you
They help to bring you near

You're still the wind beneath my wings
Your guiding light shows me the way
You fly high up with the angels
And in my heart you'll always stay

* * *

"We sat together for what seemed hours,
without saying a single word.
Our hearts were so finely tuned
to one another that we felt
no need to speak."



I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (10-28-2003 03:55 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-10-27 06:49 PM


Lovely words from your heart...James
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-10-27 07:09 PM


Suetang
Excellent writing.

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3 posted 2003-10-28 06:51 PM


Sue:  Lovely thoughts and sentiments here. I like to think your dad knows and approves of your poetry and the person you are!

Love
Betty Lou

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4 posted 2003-11-01 03:46 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sue, this one made me cry as so many of your beautiful and sincere poems do, because your love for your father is so true and so real and I know with all my heart he will forever be blessed to have a most loving and giving daughter...you! (wipes tears) His love will forever be in your heart, sweet friend, and he will always be what makes your heart fly, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2003-11-02 10:31 PM


The words are beautiful the sentiment more so.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



b.costen
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since 2003-11-02
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ontario, CAN
6 posted 2003-11-02 11:28 PM


I'd have to say I liked this quite a lot, looking forward to more of your work.

so what's it going to be then, eh?

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
7 posted 2003-11-03 01:28 AM


Sue, you have a precious thing and I'm glad you do.A treasure like this between father and daughter isn't always there.You've touched my heart with this.
Crystal

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
8 posted 2003-11-03 02:37 AM


I understand this in my own way, and you brought me to tears...
2 years for me though...

well done...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-11-03 03:12 AM


there you go again, touching my heart softly
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