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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-10-27 03:51 PM



I would like to go
to a place thats
never been.

Where pain is gone.

And memories die.

A place beyond
forget.

© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-10-27 03:53 PM


Eric, I feeling like giving you an angel hug and then flying you off to a place such as that...

Lovin' hugs,
EA

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-10-27 03:54 PM


Now Ericc...this is sad poetry, and we enjoy so much your love poetry...plant the seed again, let it grow.  
Fire Fairy
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3 posted 2003-10-27 04:00 PM


Such a simple yet beautiful piece with a very deep message. Thank you!
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2003-10-28 01:36 AM


Love comes easy, pain is harder to release and let go of, but if we forget all of it, we forget the good and happy times as well.

Sometimes pain is so painful, we can forgive, but it is hard to forget.

There is love so deep that with the same depth of love comes the same depth of pain..

I understand...(from past, not present)

just some of my thoughts..enjoyed!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-10-28 05:04 AM


me too
Mary Ann
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6 posted 2003-10-28 06:42 AM


Beautiful though sad ... thank you for the lovely read...

Best wishes,
~MA~

Enchantress
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7 posted 2003-10-28 09:03 AM


So sad Eric...
Write me some romantic thoughts...please.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Etain
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8 posted 2003-10-28 05:16 PM


Beside it seems sad, I just feel
profound love coming outside your heart.
Bautiful my friend,
I keep silent close to your stream.
Big love!
Etain.

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2003-10-28 05:37 PM


...or maybe to a place that has always been and good memories come to life again -- only pain is not allowed...?

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

SEA
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with you
10 posted 2003-10-28 11:12 PM


I know that place, haven't found it yet....but as time passes, I find myself closer to it *hugs for you*
littlewing
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11 posted 2003-10-29 12:11 PM


me too  . . Hey Eric when you find it will you please email me the directions?

Loved this
xxoo

Ericc
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12 posted 2003-10-29 01:00 PM


Hi Sue and Sea!

Of course there is such a place.
And it exist always in the last place we look.

Within each of us there is, as Herman Melville wrote..." an insular Tahiti"

The key to finding it...surrender.
It's nearer than the breath itself.


Love,
Eric

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13 posted 2003-11-01 02:30 PM




(big hugggssssssss) I too wish such a place existed and I send angel hugs your way, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
14 posted 2003-11-01 02:59 PM


patience, you will
Margherita
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15 posted 2003-11-02 06:16 PM


You just created it.
Island of peace!
With every dawn you are reborn into pure beauty ... but most of the time we refuse to let the light erase the shadows in our hearts.
I love you, Margherita

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Gaia
16 posted 2003-11-02 06:18 PM


my bags are packed
what time do we leave?

enjoyed this fantasy

cinnamongirl
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17 posted 2003-11-02 06:56 PM


What beautiful longing... and a perfect expression of the beauty of longing.

thank you for such poetic magic.

I love you,
Moca

rambling_words
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18 posted 2003-11-02 07:24 PM


What a simple way to say something extraordinary.

John

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