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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-11-05 12:36 PM



In Memory

Sometimes I wonder what is it that makes me care.
Maybe the foreverness, that touches there.
Those memories of warm and kind.
The whispers that still breeze my mind.
The experience of you to me.
I'm thankful always for whatever will be.
Because there's pleasure in memory.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-11-05 12:45 PM


at least you still care
KristieSue
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2 posted 2003-11-05 12:48 PM


Sometimes I wonder what is it that makes me care.
Maybe the foreverness, that touches there.
Those memories of warm and kind.
The whispers that still breeze my mind.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
once we love, we always love.  No matter what we say or do, there is forever a tiny part of us that holds it all in our heart...


love it...

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-11-05 12:59 PM


KristieSue..said it for me Dixie...once I love someone...I will always love someone...
it's in my nature.

And that will always make it easier to go on.


M

LeeJ
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4 posted 2003-11-05 01:00 PM


yes there is, but its even better when you can look back and smile realizing that what you had could have never evolved beyond...and the acceptance of that gives you the peace of knowledge...understanding...and allowing...acceptance....

Lovely write as always....

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5 posted 2003-11-05 01:39 PM


Lovely Maureen..
and it's good to be able to move on
still holding a piece of that love in our hearts.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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6 posted 2003-11-05 02:24 PM


WynterGal~
Yeppers ... this one's got my name on it too~
You and me ... kinda sorta thinkie alikie~
Wif our wittle hearts ... duh ... dat's it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-11-08 06:56 PM


I think one with a soft heart finds it easy to find the pleasure in memory.  James
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8 posted 2003-11-08 07:00 PM


Hearts full of memories that never go away. This was very special Maureen.
It touched my heart...

Huggles, Marti

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2003-11-09 01:27 PM


Can relate...
Beautifully written M.
TD

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10 posted 2003-11-09 01:30 PM




(smiles) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, and through your memories may you always find the beauty within and find pleasure in knowing the blessings you've always had and what blessing will be! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are special, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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11 posted 2003-11-09 08:56 PM


Memories are the part that lets you know there was purpose in what you have been through. Just my thoughts from the voice of experience. A person with a soft heart does find it easy to find pleasure in the memories if the other isn't abusive toward you for years on end. I hope this hasn't been the case in your life. It does change you if they are continually abusive after they are the one that walked.
Love,
Terri~

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12 posted 2003-11-09 09:16 PM


sweet memories help the time spent mean something afterall
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13 posted 2003-11-09 09:32 PM


I know very well what makes you care....it shines out of you. I suspect that everybody around here knows it too.

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14 posted 2003-11-09 10:32 PM


And in the final analysis, Maureen, isn't the good memories only the ones worth keeping?..very gentle smile
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