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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-26 04:47 PM


Your stomach hurts
You cannot stand to eat
If you just smell food
You feel like you might puke

Your stomach hurts
Through to your back
You try to sleep
But comfortable
You cannot be

You are naueous 24/7
You wish the foul taste in your mouth
Would just disappear
But it doesn't

You feel the chunks rise
In the back of your throat
But nothing happens
Unless you count a sore throat

the sickness
As come to stay
Hopefully not long
You say

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2003-10-26 07:08 PM


Seems a sickness is always my enemy - sicknesses always hurt the people I care about the most, and I can't stop that. Hmm... if I were a healer... but then, I couldn't steal, not even hearts. LOL

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-10-26 08:37 PM


yuck
but it has a familiar ring to it, though
16+ years ago I had a similar flu
it lasted 9 months and ended in kicking and screaming

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