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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-10-26 04:21 PM

It is true, then ~

I fit my design
and sign
and shall not resign
these facts to fate
but revel in
the unveiling of
blueness

that hottest part
of the fire

not seen for the reds
yellows nor
even for whitest
part

that bit of blue that comes
from within the flame

that which becomes the
passionate, most intense
emotion
leaving embers
of belief
behind.

Would you?

Could you reach in
to touch the blue
as it is unveiled
to you?

Taught as a child that
fire burns

and seeing only that
which one
sees,

flesh, bone,
desire?

Would then come the fire?

Would you revel in the
unveil of the
blue?

Can you stare at the flame
and go away
without the
imprint
still on your mind

behind your eyes

feeling the warm?

In the blue, then,
that is where
I reside

look carefully…

I am there…
[This message has been edited by Sunshine (10-26-2003 04:51 PM).]

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2003-10-26 04:34 PM

but i would be consumed!
arthur

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

2 posted 2003-10-26 04:38 PM

And may the echo of your words resound and be heard. Good God, Karilea. You have no idea what these words spoke to me!

So wonderful!

Patricia

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2003-10-26 04:43 PM

"that bit of blue that comes
from within the flame

that which becomes the
passionate, most intense
emotion
leaving embers
of belief
behind.

Would you?"

I saw the smoke from this fire all the way over here Kari! Damn, I could've cut and pasted the whole poem! String together a whole lot of impressive adjectives here and there will still be a few more that I could add...

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

4 posted 2003-10-26 04:51 PM

Your fire burns strong and hot and blue. Joyce

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-10-26 04:53 PM

Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-10-26 05:05 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I believe you, I just don't want to touch the flame in fear to get burnt or extinguish! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, the heart is always where that fervor is, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2003-10-26 06:16 PM

Sheesh......

breaking out the fireproof gloves....

reaching....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-10-26 06:33 PM

OOoh Myyyyyy!!!! YES!!
Excellent!
~Hugs YOU!~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So you won't ever forget me~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2003-10-26 06:54 PM

You are growing....and I am so thrilled I get to see....You have always had that style about you....THIS is Stunning Karilea~
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

10 posted 2003-10-27 10:10 AM

that bit of blue that comes
from within the flame

that which becomes the
passionate, most intense
emotion
leaving embers
of belief
behind.

Would you?

Could you reach in
to touch the blue
as it is unveiled
to you?
======================
Would you revel in the
unveil of the
blue?

Can you stare at the flame
and go away
without the
imprint
still on your mind
====================

You were expecting me right?
How could a moth NOT see this one...
not feel this one...

moth anthem baby.....moth anthem.....

(IWIHWT)

You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ...
You're the whispering and the sighing of my tires in the rain.

J. Browne

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-10-27 12:34 PM

the very core of the fire stirrs with the passion of these words, too
very nice

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-10-27 12:51 PM

makes me think of when you stare at a flame and you can't seem to look at anything else...you become hypnotized.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

13 posted 2003-10-27 03:42 PM

Wow....beautiful!!!

Eric

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

14 posted 2003-10-28 10:08 AM

yep, gonna have to go with a "wow" too

this is fantastic! and awww...I love that picture of you!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

15 posted 2003-10-28 10:15 AM

With such cool writing you write of such hot stuff!

HHH
Linda

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

16 posted 2003-11-02 10:27 AM

"Can you stare at the flame
and go away
without the
imprint
still on your mind"

No, I don't think I can. Enjoyed this, Karilea.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

17 posted 2003-11-02 11:12 AM

my hand is nearing the flame
and you know?
I am not even frightened . . .
*smile*
This, My Lady . . .
is beauty
xxoo

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

18 posted 2003-11-02 11:37 AM

Can you stare at the flame
and go away
without the
imprint
still on your mind

behind your eyes

feeling the warm?

no....
it's like when you bite the inside of your cheek
then...do it again...same spot

this is wonderful, Karilea

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

19 posted 2003-11-02 01:39 PM

but revel in
the unveiling of
blueness

that hottest part
of the fire

not seen for the reds
yellows nor
even for whitest
part

that bit of blue that comes
from within the flame

that which becomes the
passionate, most intense
emotion
leaving embers
of belief
behind.

Would you?

Could you reach in
to touch the blue
as it is unveiled
to you?

Taught as a child that
fire burns

and seeing only that
which one
sees,

flesh, bone,
desire?

Would then come the fire?

Would you revel in the
unveil of the
blue?

Oh my goodness......just oh my goodness!!!!

(and of course, I'm keeping it, too)

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

20 posted 2003-11-02 01:51 PM

Karilea...I'm so glad to see this side of you! Intense, yet so like silk.

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

21 posted 2003-11-02 03:53 PM

You do Kansas proud with this one Sunshine, very nicely written.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

22 posted 2003-11-02 05:33 PM

..Sunshine../\..indeed....wow....ohh..

../\..Spiros

---------------calmly-----

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

23 posted 2003-11-02 05:38 PM

Ah, this is the famous "In the Blue" and ... it is quite amazing.
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

24 posted 2003-11-02 05:57 PM

enjoyed

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