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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-10-26 01:36 PM


A girl had been hearing
Strang noises in her room
Since they moved in the house
But it never bugged her
Because she thought it cool
If there was a ghost in her room

One night she saw a shadow
She put the covers over her head
And to scare whatever it was
She screamed, "BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!"

She heard a shriek
And pulled down the covers
She saw the ghost run
For cover
In her closet

She snuck out of bed
And over to the closet
She opened the door
And stared at the ghost of a young man

She said to the ghost,
"What is it you want?"
The ghost answered back
"I thought you were my girlfriend."
The girl smiled
And motioned for him to come out

She crawled into bed and said,
"Tell me the story of your girlfriend.
For she has probably been long dead."

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-26 02:34 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Julie, I remember this story well, and I know how it ends but I'm going to pretend I am reading it for the first time again, hehehe, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-26-2003 02:35 PM).]

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2003-10-26 07:10 PM


Another of many good works Julie.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13
Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2003-10-29 02:21 AM


Ok... looking for part 2 now.

Sherry


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