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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-26 12:06 PM



He Flies

he rose above
his dreams
to dance a line
designed by clouds
and touches whispers
of where birds sing
traveling this motion
wide his heart spreads
caressing currents of air
leaving behind
weighted things
to sail upon
a new ocean
of blue
where looking down
things seem so small
he races the wind
hurries to the sky
he is lifted gliding
on his dreams
as his wings
are watched
by the golden eye


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-26 12:34 PM


just one word comes to mind:

beautiful

MARK V SHELDON
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2 posted 2003-10-26 01:57 PM


Sounds euphoric...

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the_loner_23
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3 posted 2003-10-26 01:58 PM


This is so beautiful.

Cold hands means a warm heart

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
4 posted 2003-10-26 02:12 PM


beautiful indeed
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-10-26 02:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, I absolutely love this, sweet friend, you write with pure uplifting grace here, yay! (kiss on cheek) I wish for all the children to spread the wings of their hearts and fly like this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Darren
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6 posted 2003-10-26 07:20 PM


Lucky angel, he earned his wings.
Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-10-26 09:06 PM


you're amazing red..stunning
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