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iwannarime22
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0 posted 2003-10-26 11:34 AM


Tears of my eyes are rolling down
Tears of my eyes are falling down
Tears of my eyes haven't yet touched the skies
All because of you

I lifted my hands to shout up to you
I lifted my hands to the wild blue
I lifted my hands to show that I care
All because you were there



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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-10-26 01:37 PM


This is very beautiful. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-10-26 01:39 PM


A nice way to start.  Welcome to Passions,
enjoyed the write.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-10-26 01:49 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is such an uplifting and spiritually heartfelt debut, sweet friend, know every time you reach out, the spirits are reaching out to you too and guiding you with their love and sunlight, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your wonderful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much, and be sure to check your E-mail for a very special greeting from all of us here at Passions just for you! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Mary Ann
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4 posted 2003-10-27 04:26 AM


Very beautiful and heartfelt


God bless,

~MA~

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-10-27 05:30 AM


Lovely sentiments...so very nice to read!
Thanks for sharing this. Very uplifting!
Love,
Terri~

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