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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Revelation I paused a moment, time stood still A shiver passed, I felt a chill A shaft of silver moonlight shone Upon to a name, a date, a stone. And in my mind I passed away Into the past some other day A day of joy and laughter’s sound With birds and bees and ants around A checkered clothe upon the green A day of warmth a loving scene Of eyes, of flirt and woolen sighs With petty words and soulful lies This is when I brim a tear This happy time of yesteryear It holds me fast a full blown seem I could not call it quite a dream And ere I cross into this zone This heavy loss, I leave a stone. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I paused a moment, time stood still A shiver passed, I felt a chill A shaft of silver moonlight shone Upon to a name, a date, a stone. =============================== Your poetry is the real revelation me sweet Sy-guy...and each morning we rev up on your rhymes   *ww*    |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes those moments that make us shudder for some unknown reason to me then they pass like everything else and i never know why...... thought provoking as always.......  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Good morning Tink, What are you doing up so early, turning the clocks back? Your reply has just made my day. You know it doesn't start till I hear from you. WWRS |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Thank you love I know what you mean. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My dear tumbling, Tumbleweed, whenever the veil lifts to reveal a pleasant moment past, not only see ~ but be...  Warm morning hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful thoughts in this morning read Sy! Very much enjoyed as always. Off to do something or other with the clocks now.. Then shall we have tea? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very insightful write this morning Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
shivered me timbers, but gently |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Thank you my sweet, I do try. Nancy, By all means after the clocks. scorpio Thank you dear heart. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun, I promise, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"This is when I brim a tear This happy time of yesteryear It holds me fast a full blown seem I could not call it quite a dream" Good Morning Sy! (So what if I am a day late...) I really enjoyed this one, esp. the lines above.. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Writen clearly, with a pen of excellence... A somber but enjoyable read, I applaud you. ice/ford |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There are revelations, and then there are Sy equations. A cup of coffee, a poem of Sy... I'm set to go! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan You are a peach. ice I thank you for the lovely comp. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And you are a firefly in my eye. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Sad feel to this. A bit of regret? :'( Love, Terri~  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello Seymour, Another excellent thought-provoking write. I love your rhymes, my friend.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Terri, Just a bit, Ethel, And I love you my friend. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gee, I get to reply to an orange pumpkin setting... You masterfully pull us through your mind with a pen which writes endlessly... Thanx Sy....until the morrow breaks a new dawn...when you rise again. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, Thank you my friend and I hope you had a good sunday. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Seymour, this is sure a poignant bittersweet poem, sweet friend, as George Harrison says, "all things must pass" but if we cherish it all dear to our hearts nothing ever changes! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Just knew you would understand. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well darn Sy...this one 'bout gave me chills!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan Thank you my friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
remember the good times |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I try, I try. |
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