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Open Poetry #29

Undertone

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-26 01:26 AM

Undertone

I am weak
I break
where is
the mortar
that tears
and sand mix
combining to
create concrete
to place between
piled ragged
broken places
the worth of
shifting parts
stones placed
tightly in
webbed walls
what power
will fit
in all these
empty spaces
to give me
strength

"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-10-26 01:32 AM

this aches

alisa
Member

since 2003-08-20

Posts 70
Florida

2 posted 2003-10-26 09:31 AM

but of course a great write.

[This message has been edited by alisa (10-26-2003 09:32 AM).]

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2003-10-26 03:33 PM

"what power
will fit
in all these
empty spaces
to give me
strength"

You wrote this feeling very well Helen. Love the title too!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-26 03:38 PM

(big hugggsssssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, now spread your hearts wings and fly as no tidal temptress can take you down! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-26-2003 03:38 PM).]

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