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ecrivan
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0 posted 2003-10-26 12:43 PM



He's a caped villain with teeth to bite
awakened from his casket after the light
a doer of cursed deeds that casts a spell
misery plagues man or woman that hear his knell..

if they lived by day, now they rise at night
to follow his commandment at the first starlight
you'd notice a glaze in their eyes as they'd approach
and wonder about their purpose as fear encroached...


it began as a legend of a ruthless prince, we're told
he'd cut off the heads of enemies, mount them on poles
he'd turn into a wolf or a bat if it mattered
a change of form when his spirit was battered...

but you could keep the molesting spirit at bay
with a cross in his face his legs would sway
or a wreath of garlic around windows of your room
to prevent his entrance and the moment of your doom.





[This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-26-2003 05:51 PM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-10-26 01:06 AM


I'm glad something could control him.  Scary poem.  Joyce
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2 posted 2003-10-26 01:19 AM


whoohoo! GOOSEBUMPS!

good to see you wrting again Martin!

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3 posted 2003-10-26 07:43 AM



Ah, just in time
for the coming weekend.
Let's keep THIS one
at the top!

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4 posted 2003-10-26 07:49 AM


ecrivan
You know I held up a jewish star and he paid no attention at all. LOL Good write

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5 posted 2003-10-26 04:01 PM




(sinister laughs) Aha...but now since I have been compelled for a strange desire to eat Italian food, I have grown accustomed to garlic, now what will save you, ahahaha! (giggles) This is hauntingly delightful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

ecrivan
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6 posted 2003-10-26 05:42 PM


Hey Sy,

So much for Jewish stars when this demon is so goyish! hehehe.


Passing

My other Pen Name here is wordwizard for my desk top computer...watch out for poems under that pseudonym


ecrivan
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7 posted 2003-10-26 05:44 PM


Joyce and Noah

But I eat garlic all the time...maybe my breath works just as well hehe


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8 posted 2003-10-26 09:08 PM


Nice write ecrivan Vlady would be proud
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