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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-10-25 10:50 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

The first time that I saw you
My heart began to race
You radiated love and happiness
From your warm and friendly face

The first time that you held me
Safe and warm within your arms
Love had claimed another victim
As you seduced me with your charms

The first time our lips met
I felt the passion rise within
To have these feelings of desire
Must surely be a sin

The first time we watched the sun
Settle slowly beneath the sea
It was at that very moment
That your heart belonged to me

The first time we made love
Beneath the pale moonlight
To you my heart surrendered
On that balmy Summer's night

The years pass by so quickly
But our love will never age
We look forward to each chapter
As we turn another page

* * *

"In the end, nothing we do
or say in this lifetime
will matter as much
as the way we have
loved one another"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2003-10-25 11:58 PM


Sue

This is a beautiful passionate romantic positive poem......Very nicely done!

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-10-26 01:31 AM


nice to see you writing again Sue. I've missed you. This is a beautiful piece.
Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
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3 posted 2003-10-26 04:17 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, true love is timeless and I wish for this eternal happiness to always sing in your heart, as we are forever young and the children within us all always sing! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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4 posted 2003-10-26 10:22 PM


Sue:  Lovely sentiments and hope this is always true for you!

Betty Lou Hebert

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