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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2003-10-25 09:26 PM


TWENTY OR LESS…#172

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


delicate and intricate

your smiling

as I nestle
in your eyes’ depths

afraid

my mind will
obscure
this

now


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2003-10-25 09:50 PM


Mark, does this mean sometimes it might be good to be closed minded?
LOL

came back to fix a dumb typo, read again, and say good morning

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-26-2003 08:46 AM).]

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2 posted 2003-10-25 10:30 PM


But....you were doing so good..don't let it end like that.. darn it...you were doing so good. :P
Terri~

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3 posted 2003-10-26 01:39 AM


yes
Patricia
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4 posted 2003-10-26 07:34 AM


It is the fear, I think, that will obscure the moment.  Just breathe.

Patricia

PS...I enjoy these 20 or less moments!

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5 posted 2003-10-26 07:58 AM


MARK,
Good morning my friend.

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2003-10-26 01:50 PM


You know, Kacy...  I think you've got a point there!


Terri, with inspiration like that, I'll try harder!

Dixie:  Such concise brevity!

Patricia:  Yes -- fear.  The ultimate four-letter f-word...  Deep breath...  There -- all better now.  Thank you.

Good day to you, Sir!

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
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7 posted 2003-10-26 03:50 PM




(smiles) Only you can paint what you see looking through loves eyes, so cherish the moment and don't let it obfuscate! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, tuck that fear away, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Duncan
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8 posted 2003-10-26 04:09 PM


"your smiling

as I nestle
in your eyes’ depths"

Really liked this Mark.  Brought several things to mind, all of them pleasant.  
Did you ever feel like you'd known someone's eyes longer than you'd known them?  Hmmmm...must be time for my medication!  

MARK V SHELDON
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9 posted 2003-10-26 04:37 PM


Indeed, Noah -- that's what moments are for -- cherishing.

Duncan:  I believe that would serve as proof regarding past lives and loves since "the eyes are the windows to the soul" -- no medication required

-MVS

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