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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-10-25 08:13 PM



Thirty-Eight October's
~*Marge Tindal*~

Little girl ... lithe of spirit
for thirty-eight October's
you have written new memories
of precious old-remember
on a loving mother's heart~

Eight with your free-of-spirit
and now the passing of thirty
without the sound of your laughter
except through Mommy's loving recall~

Michelle's are precious
They only come along
once in a mommy's lifetime
They are supposed to be forever
and when they cannot be
the heart remembers anew
with the dawning of thirty-eight October's~



~Dedicated to my heart sister, Martie,
in loving memory of Michelle Lee Jameson's birth-of-day~
October 28, 1965 - February 21, 1974


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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1 posted 2003-10-25 08:27 PM


Oh Marge, my sweet sister of heart....You have opened the flood gates of tears and love...thank you for your loving heart and your remember.  I appreciate (more than I have words for) this and you!
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2 posted 2003-10-25 10:54 PM


Dear Marge:  How tender and loving!  We lost our only grandson before his tenth birthday and know what a painful event it is!  Poor Martie, having to live with that loss.  How lucky she has you for a heart sister!

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2003-10-25 11:20 PM


This is so like you to remember Marge....
so loving and caring...
We will never ever forget Michelle...
she lives on through Martie's and others words.
Thank you for the remember.
~Heart Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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4 posted 2003-10-25 11:27 PM


We think we create our children and make them what they are. The fact is, they create us, and make us what we are.

When one is lost so tragically and so young, still that child creates the parent, makes her what she becomes. Well done, Michelle.

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6 posted 2003-10-26 11:54 AM


Marge, this is such a loving dedication to
Martie and her daughter, Michelle.
Just beautiful.
Thanks you for sharing this.
With love,
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-10-26 03:54 PM


So tender and loving... such a wonderful gift from one special lady to another.
Betty
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8 posted 2003-10-28 08:58 AM


This is beautiful.
Betty

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9 posted 2003-10-28 09:04 AM


Marge,
A lovely write,

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10 posted 2003-10-28 10:11 AM


"and when they cannot be
the heart remembers anew"


yes....

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11 posted 2003-10-28 10:51 AM


Marge - thanks for the loving tribute to Martie and Michelle and for saying so well what we all feel...Paul
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12 posted 2003-10-28 04:10 PM


Marge, you always have that very special and loving touch to share with your friends. You're like a poetic angel, and always giving us joy and happiness...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

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