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meteoraLP
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since 2003-10-24
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0 posted 2003-10-25 02:29 PM


pain

like a bulldog with a razorblade

cuts through my edges as it cuts through the game

dancing laughing smiling, but not

releasing only that force which is Nothing

and blinding us all

pain


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I hope im not posting too much. Could someone please tell me the guidelines for this board? thanks.

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1 posted 2003-10-25 06:47 PM




(big hugggsssssss) First of all let me say how this poem deeply touched me just like that blade, sweet friend, may all this heal for you soon and may amends be made! (sigh)
Now as a member of the Deputy Mod Squad, I can happily answer your question.

Here at Passions, we have a three-post-a-day rule set. That way poems don't get pushed and lost down the page as fast and everyone has an equal chance to get the replies they deserve! Posting more than three poems a day tends to flood the forums and those who overpost tend to find their own poems receive no or few comments!



We are so happy you asked and strongly recommend from here on posting three or less poems a day! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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