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PouringJewels
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0 posted 2003-10-25 09:58 AM


                                                        
              

            Day after day the scene is the same.
            Yes, I guess we all need a change.
            Leave your troubles and come where
            I lay.
            I'll leave you memories for a rainy
            Day.

            Laughter raised my face to the moon.
            Relaxed and assured as you sang
            Your tune.
            I feel a change, am I beginning to care?
            It's alright, I don't expect you
            To be there.

            My eyes have opened to your gentleness
            Our communication is clear.
            We can sit for awhile and gaze at the
            Stars so clear.
      
            Until you must venture out for things
            Unlearned.
            And my door will be open upon your
            Return.

                   1/26/76 J. Rose


        
          
  
    

    
      

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-10-25 10:02 AM


PouringJewels
Enjoyed the read.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-10-25 10:08 AM



Julia, you fit your user name very well.  Thank you for the gift of change.

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3 posted 2003-10-25 12:17 PM


Julia~
This is just lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-10-25 01:18 PM


beautifully touching
IrishDreamer
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5 posted 2003-10-25 01:45 PM


Really enjoyed this one.

Thanks

~Angie

littlewing
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6 posted 2003-10-26 03:49 PM


Julia,

My God you are flying through here
this is amazing writing Lady

I identify with soo much of it
My God . . .
yes CHANGE . . . a good thing
MUCH NEEDED

love this and you
me sis
*smile*
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-10-26 04:30 PM




(sigh) We all need to change, and there is always a second chance when changing! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

arthur
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8 posted 2003-10-26 04:37 PM


will you be sleeping when i come ?
arthur

wranx
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9 posted 2003-10-26 09:30 PM


Hi sister mine...
Love the write...very nicely done.

And I'll call you soon to get your news.

(As you know I've been outta town for a bit. Not nearly long enough)

Love ya! Talk soon!

Brother Ed

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garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-10-27 04:33 AM


Julia, this is beautiful writing.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel

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12 posted 2003-10-27 05:33 AM


So loving. Unconditional. Beautiful!
Love,
Terri~

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