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Michael G
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0 posted 2003-10-25 01:59 AM


Nation come alive in music!
NATION come alive in song!
To the heaven's beware of the
last beat of bass rumbling
through the ghetto of your
soul as you awake the pleasure
inside of that deep saturation
the mind cannot keep up with
the 120 beats per minute
your feet are slamming to,
the failure of which brings the
music of words to paper
and out comes the truth,
the truth which sets you free
but binds you to the madness
of each line you create, over
and over you see the words
the music beating in your minds
eye falling on your hands,
falling on your knees to faith
the faith you wanted to believe
in thats only a word away,
that faith, that word, that music, that song!
All which starts in the heart
can become your music.
All that becomes your music
is the prayer of song.
All of those prayers
become your words.
All these words are faith
and faith can move us all
to a joy we always wanted to be.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-25 02:14 PM


very uplifting! thank you!
garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-10-25 08:07 PM


All that becomes your music
is the prayer of song.
All of those prayers
become your words.
All these words are faith
and faith can move us all
to a joy we always wanted to be.


A very true poem. I enjoyed reading.
Hugs  
Ethel

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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3 posted 2003-10-25 08:41 PM


Loved this...now saying a silent prayer...thanks for the reminder to pray without ceasing. I forgot that.
Terri~

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Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-10-26 04:49 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, I live for the music and want to devote my life to it, and I encourage all the children of the world to sing along with all who sing, yay! (big hugggssssssss) This is an absolute tribute to faith, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***


[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-26-2003 04:50 PM).]

iwannarime22
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since 2003-10-25
Posts 19
Rogers, Arkansas
5 posted 2003-10-26 04:53 PM


All I can say is wow. HAHAHA I loved it!
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

6 posted 2003-10-31 03:14 PM


I am glad I went searching for just the right poem today...
I'd say I found it.  Enjoyed it much.

Mordecai's Mommy
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since 2003-09-24
Posts 12
San Miguel, Ca
7 posted 2003-11-13 06:36 PM


Very nice write, as usual. Your poems have a way of making one think- thank you.
Mordecai's Mommy

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