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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-25 01:52 AM


the candles,
the walls. they
play with shadows
and longing for façade
upon lackness.
i dance within the stretch of light
brace my lean on dark beams…


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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
1 posted 2003-10-25 01:57 AM


library worthy. definitly.
Kicked my......right out from under me.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-10-25 01:58 AM


bah...forgot to check the little box >_<

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-10-25 08:53 AM


I enjoyed your lean shadowy imagery.
Yes...those dancing shadows, what thoughts do they keep from view?

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2003-10-25 01:27 PM


yes,
also like the shadowy obscure feel to this
well done

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-10-25 01:30 PM


me too
MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...
6 posted 2003-10-25 01:41 PM


Becoming one with the fire...?  A gothic scene comes to mind with this succinct encapsulation.

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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
7 posted 2003-10-25 02:55 PM


gothic u say Mark, quite possibly, i was listening Tristania, and they always make me feel...
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