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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-10-24 08:31 PM


breakage
bit's and piece's
memories

to edge
where it pleases


where one
becomes two
the moments

undone
into few

fragments

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon
1 posted 2003-10-24 11:26 PM


Grand in 20 or less. Great job
inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
2 posted 2003-10-25 01:21 PM


scattered
the words
are like
heart beats
stopping and starting
all over again

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-10-25 01:33 PM


sometimes it happens like that, dudn't it?


[This message has been edited by passing shadows (10-25-2003 01:34 PM).]

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21
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4 posted 2003-10-25 02:29 PM


Shards of thoughts with these minimal pieces.  Good work.

-MVS

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meteoraLP
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since 2003-10-24
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5 posted 2003-10-25 02:31 PM


its amazing how much power one convey with so few words.  congrats.
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Gaia
6 posted 2003-10-25 02:32 PM


Craig, you've broken a truth into bite size, digestible pieces.
Well done!

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-10-25 06:06 PM




(smiles) You always make each little piece make sense and put it all together, sweet friend, what a beautiful diseection, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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