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WhiteRose
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0 posted 2003-10-24 07:47 PM



What familiar do you find here
amongst the broken of a life,
the shattered of existence
the sadness of what might,
have been sweet perfection
without edges, not defined.
Just a pretty image dancing
twirling endlessly in rhyme.

Can you reach out and touch it
hold it, feel it, keep it close
with the hatred , and the pain,
you who always does morose.
Smiling behind your eyes,
nevermore sings the raven.
Where is the quiet comfort,
and our loves soft haven.

Strangely I can sense
a void, an emptiness.
Yet for you, there is pleasure
there is joy, and revenge.

WhiteRose 10/24/03

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1 posted 2003-10-25 05:18 AM


it never does change all the way, does it? There's always a trace of the "same-old"
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2003-10-25 12:22 PM


WhiteRose~
An aching write~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

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