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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2003-10-24 06:21 AM



I still remember it
Still feel how warm it is
Still breath you so deeply
With closing eyes and strong hugs
The first kiss I never imagin
From your lips to mine
Your softness hands
Your wispered of love
Still hear your fast breaths
Still touch your hair slowly
The first kiss I never had
I cant stop imaging how warm it was
I cant stop imaging your hugs
I'll keep waiting to kiss you
To get the warms from your heart
I'll be missing you each time
The first kiss that will never end

You Are My End Secret Life...
Be Sure That I Can Be always With You...
Through The Distances...
Through Life Troubles...
Me And You Is One...

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-10-24 07:01 AM


I cant stop imaging your hugs
I'll keep waiting to kiss you
To get the warms from your heart
I'll be missing you each time
The first kiss that will never end

yes, that unmatched kiss always treasured


Fire Fairy
Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43
Australia
2 posted 2003-10-24 07:08 AM


Oh how luscious!

You must have had this kiss, because you wrote it with so much passion and feeling. Your descriptive words took me on a magical carpet ride of romance and seduction.

Thanks for sharing!

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-10-24 07:41 AM


deliciously expressed!  smiles and huggles
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