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folded arms and shaking head |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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In my chair feet dangling lacking rationality I'd reason with you if I could if you'd listen then I would-- how I yearn lucidity vocabulary's art of tongue wisdom of the very young or elderly too tired to speak and no-- it's not the shape of spoon no--it's not the taste of food nor is it your lack of game that makes me clamp my lips this way rejection of the offerings enticement of the sugar sweet coatings of the coo-- say "Please?" I turn my head away. Put the bowl down. Let me be. When I get hungry I will eat. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
always gotta wonder what those poor kids are thinking... how much they think... they're probably smarter then us... reality just made us stupid. well done  Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I turn my head away. Put the bowl down. Let me be. When I get hungry I will eat. Karen, I feel this way, too, sometimes....and want to just be left alone until I'm ready...... A good thinker, K.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yeah but sometimes you need that kick in the pants ya know? That encouragement...not nagging but something a little less. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I'd reason with you if I could if you'd listen then I would-- yep....just yep... know this all to well Karen... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Loved this Serenity! Damn! Is everyone been writing up a storm while I've been working 56 hour weeks? Too good girl! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I turn my head away. Put the bowl down. Let me be. When I get hungry I will eat." Yep, exactly. Hi Karen...  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ohh man . . . yep . . . and when I eat, is when I eat love you Lady . . . brilliant writing here: how I yearn lucidity vocabulary's art of tongue wisdom of the very young or elderly too tired to speak xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You remind me of someone here, er me I think. Wonderful as always. Maree fate is not just |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I always like seeing your muse.It's different that it touches me. Crystal |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
serenity, As I read this I couldn't help thinking it's not about the young, or the old, but about all of us who have needed care at one time or might in the future. Too sad. Too true. "When I am hungry I will eat". "Infirmary", if it rings a bell that's not Pavlovs',then you've probably been there. Thanks for this one. Doc |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You have a way with words, my friend...loved it. jwesley |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
And so I have a nephew who loves his own variety of food..I'm sure he'll find his way through the world of choices  good subject matter!Ciao, ecrivan |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm just a stubborn lil thang... thanks all for reading.  and doc moose? special thanks for seeing on through. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This reminds me of the time I played with laryngitis [what else does one do with it?] and the questions never seemed to cease... and all I could do was fold arms and shake head. I like Doc's take on it as well. We have to be there, to know! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(shows pouty puppy face) Fine! (giggles in delight) Hehehe, kids can do the darndest things but they are soooooooo cute and impossible to resist, sweet friend, hehehe, you'll be picking the bowl up in no time, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn yer good! ~yeti |
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