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Darren
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0 posted 2003-10-24 04:03 AM



Open your eyes and stretch out your heart,
draw back the curtains and chase out the dark.
Tear down your walls from all they encumber,
the dawn has rose, now rise from your slumber.
Take deep breaths and taste the dew,
now shed your skin and shine like new.
For the sun is yours, as it's always been.
You her master and she your queen.
Awaken your soul it sleeps to tight.
Your spring has come and it's promise is bright.

© Copyright 2003 Darren - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-10-24 04:06 AM


very nice
Darren
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2 posted 2003-10-24 03:01 PM


thanks...
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
3 posted 2003-10-24 04:19 PM


nice....h
Sadelite
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4 posted 2003-10-24 05:04 PM


Wow.  You've convinced me to brightly embark a new day!  This has so much warmth and excitement.
                           Sadelite

Sunnyone
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5 posted 2003-10-24 05:11 PM


This is a joyous read, and sparkling with zest for the new day!! Excellent, my friend!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2003-10-24 05:11 PM


Darren
Well done, enjoyed the read.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2003-10-24 05:46 PM


I have put this in my library so I can come back to it in the mornings and be so inspired by its message.  Wonderful write and welcome to our pages of blue.
angelblueyes
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Oklahoma
8 posted 2003-10-24 07:21 PM


I will look at all my awakenings in a new light.
Crystal

Darren
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9 posted 2003-10-24 08:00 PM


You are all too kind, thankyou everyone.
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