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I'll Love You Still
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I'll Love You Still |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 When time is growing shorter Days are swift and few And silver is the color of our hair We'll sit beside the seashore Watching life renew I'll love you still When chill is in the air... As days turn into months Then months to passing years And all the storms we weather make us strong We'll laugh sometimes Then sometimes dry each other's tears I'll love you still Through all that comes along... So, sit with me, and gaze upon The windswept shore Then take my hand as lovers often do For what we share will carry on Forevermore I'll love you still Long after life is through... Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry because I believe the most beautiful love is that which is given a lifetime plus infinity! (smiles) You have a golden giving heart, sweet friend, yay, I love this, this made my heart smile, I've missed you soooooooo much and am so happy you're back, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sunnyone, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh Noah, thank you!! You know how much it means when I see your name in reply?? Well, it just brightens my day, and having friends like you to share thoughts with is truly wonderful!!!!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sunny your soul speaks volumes throughout this poem, glad to see love that is happy about the future...soulmates grow even closer as the years pass and become golden. ~  ARH |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is so beautiful! |
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Fire Fairy Junior Member
since 2003-10-22
Posts 43Australia |
Woahhhh! You took my breath away! So often I have pondered the greatness of our existence and if love is strong enough to defy time. So many people these days fall out of love with what was supposed to be their life long partner. This made it true that love can stand the test of times and revel in the simplicity of BEING. Thank you sweet soul. xx |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi ARH, and thank you! Yes, I agree with you, in that soulmates find a certain comfort in the passage of time together...the secret is not to look back, only forward...nice to see you here, my friend...~S~ Hi passing shadows, and thank you! The beauty lies in the reader's perception, the poem is only the tool to help each of us see...~S~ Hi Fire Fairy, and thank you! It is so true that today's world seldom allows for anything that is lasting. But you are right in saying that the timelessness of lasting love is found in just being...being there for each other, every moment of every day...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was absolutely beautifully written and expressed....gave my heart a warmth and tears of happiness..I know several couples as such...thank you and a very good morning sent your way.... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi LeeJ and thank you! Yes, there are many couples blessed with a special love, and it's a joy to see, but more of a joy to be amongst their number...and I also am wishing that you are having a good morning there across the big pond!!! ~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... *S* There are times you know your love will last until life ends and beyond... that's when you truly count your blessings. *S* This is loving... and lovely. *S* |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
awesome! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My eyes literally welled up with the beauty of your words. My sentiments exactly regarding the man that I love. Thank you, Sunnyone!  Linda |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm I want this kind of love. Great poem Sunnyone! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
So very beautiful Sunny, outstanding write. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Suthern, and thank you! Oh yes, counting your blessings is part of love, I believe...it helps us to realize just what we have at our fingertips, a precious gift...~S~ Hi Brad, and thank you! So glad that you came by for a read and a visit...always do love to see your name in reply! ~S~ Hi Linda, and thank you! And consider this poem a gift of friendship to you and your love, ok? I'd like that....~S~ Hi EV2, and thank you! I have no doubt that this kind of love will come your way...everyone has the same chances if they desire it bad enough....~S~ Hi Gentle Spirit, and thank you! I really enjoyed writing this one...you know, a poet turns out a lot of work, but some of them just feel special, as this did. I guess I will have to credit my Music Maker with the inspiration here...  ...~S~Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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