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mah jong |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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hungry for the something baking just beyond the door angry at the nothing there in feast of can I have some more restless for a break in wall curse monotony of sky a prison skin of hostage sin and pores that will not sweat me out patterns on the lid of eye tell me tiles, how should I play? take this set and plan the next shuffle for another game. I always give before I take. the obvious infuriates after I concede my loss-- then I see where I have strayed calculating terms of cost. click-wood-click the pieces fit designed to madden me just so. mix the pieces twice, my love-- just one more game before I go... |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
nice imagery |
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Pearle New Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 7 |
Nice one, sb ... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
very well done, my friend...so passionately played...wheww! jwesley |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Karen, this is sooooooo beautifully passionate, sweet friend, all your gorgeous poetry makes me smile and has its own movement and rules, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-24-2003 12:21 AM).] |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"hungry for the something baking just beyond the door angry at the nothing there" When you figure it all out...please give me a call...I am just too tired. Love you lady! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
restless for a break in wall curse monotony of sky a prison skin of hostage sin and pores that will not sweat me out patterns on the lid of eye ============================ so that was you in me mirror   "I've still got sand in my shoes |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes! One more time!  Enjoyed the game with you! lol Happy Halloweeny!  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh much enjoyed this K. Love ya lady! Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Serenity...Enjoyed. Is it a game of tiles or pieces of your life that you write of? You have me pondering dear friend...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
I am going to cry...this entire poem is just to good. Now I am going to have to spend the weekend trying to come up with something this good myself! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"a prison skin of hostage sin and pores that will not sweat me out" Nicely written |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Ok, I take off my hat and applaud you!!! I happen to be a Mah Jongg addict...but I prefer to play the computer! So, this one was a sheer delight to read...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I always give before I take. the obvious infuriates after I concede my loss-- then I see where I have strayed calculating terms of cost. ~*~ Ah girl. You did it. Again. Where's my ersters? |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
Enjoy this, nice to see game of east in west poem, wish I could find three more to play game now. Lotus Breeze be East wind, Spring flowers in hand picking from garden wall. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm still a novice a mah jong, but I am WAY addicted already--and as always, I see the patterns of life in strategic games. Sunnyone? Should you ever have the time, I would love to play a game or two with you. Should be fun for you--smile--I seem to have a pattern of LOSING. Hugs and love to all. I do appreciate your reading. I just don't know how to say thank you properly. sigh. |
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