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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-10-23 11:30 PM


Love is gained
And sometimes as soon as it is
It is lost again
One day you'll have to let it go

You feel the pain
Your heart can't stop hurting
You feel like without him
You might die
One day you'll have to let it go


Your heart seems to be cold
Like it will never let
Another man in at all
One day you'll have to let it go

You have all these hurt feelings
But you must learn
One day you'll have to let it go

Cold hands means a warm heart

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2003-10-23 11:33 PM


It does arise, doesn't it...for many.

jwesley

ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
2 posted 2003-10-23 11:34 PM


But the truth is you never know
Which of the two will be letting go.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-10-24 02:39 AM


Julie, this is very true so
many times. I hope you're doing
good?
Hugs  
Ethel

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2003-10-24 02:42 AM


Very true write, very truly written
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-10-24 04:41 AM


very wise words
KoKo
Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
6 posted 2003-10-24 07:21 AM


I know i know....but does it have to be today?
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-10-24 07:38 AM


very good awareness...allowing
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
8 posted 2003-10-25 12:09 PM


Nice writing...James
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