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wordwizard
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0 posted 2003-10-23 08:17 PM



It is the same fall season
thoughts flow without reason
to be able to catch a thought in the wind
as a leaf turns in the air on a spin

I may be careless of my health
stalk new zones with zeal and stealth
to keep an upper hand on a creative space
to let juices flow regardless the pace

of the ordinary life that bogs me down
that keeps me rooted to the ground
while my root-like tendrils spread
to catch some action up ahead.

© Copyright 2003 ecrivan



[This message has been edited by wordwizard (10-24-2003 10:24 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-10-23 08:55 PM


cool write

enjoyed!

mysticpoe
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2 posted 2003-10-23 09:20 PM


Enjoyed the read, nice flow and rhythm.

mysticpoe

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then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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Gaia
3 posted 2003-10-23 09:31 PM



I love this write!
thank you for my new fall spin

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-10-23 10:55 PM


Smiling!!

What glee came to my mind's eye...
In full color.  Happy Autumn. TD

wordwizard
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5 posted 2003-10-24 10:28 PM


a new spin on an old subject..hehe thanks allfor the comments

ecrivan

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