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iwontdrownagain
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since 2003-10-04
Posts 39
Massachusetts

0 posted 2003-10-23 09:55 AM


Here's another poem I have. I have been searching for some great love poetry of mine, but it is tough looking between work and school, so here is a semi-good love poem. Hope you enjoy!
~Lynn

Finally

I'm trying to get to a place.
I'm sorry I bumped into you.
It is as if I have seen you before.
Where is it I saw you?
You tell me it's Okay as
I help you pick up your things.
It’s in my head. I know you.
I just can’t place you, but it's
Adhered in my mind.
I think I know. I saw you
In my dreams a while ago,
Until I stopped believing
Thinking I would never see you.
You take me out to lunch
Because I helped you just once.
I tell you how my heart used to bleed
As we talk over coffee.
I never trust anyone so easily,
And I can't imagine why you’re the one
I can open up to.
You assure me you understand,
You tell me you've been in my place, in my shoes.
Before I know it, we're so utterly in love.
Our minds think alike. You know, I know, what we want.
It only takes you to get me back to reality, to open my eyes.



[This message has been edited by iwontdrownagain (10-23-2003 10:07 AM).]

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-10-23 03:41 PM


write when you can...life comes first...but I enjoy your poems when you are able to put them up
mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

2 posted 2003-10-23 09:28 PM


Nice, enjoyed the read.

mysticpoe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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