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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-10-23 07:38 AM




At the edge of the world, the sky and sea merge.

Transient, copiuous colours of aquamarine, beryl and azure, surround the floating Mythol bird.

Fleeting rays of light, mirror sky, sea.
Clear pirecing light of a new early morning.

Floating and gently rolling on the  top of the sea, the Mythol brings calmness and perfect oness to the sea and sky.

Heaven is opened up by the palest of light, floating to the very edge of the world.


[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (10-24-2003 03:42 AM).]

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2003-10-23 07:42 AM


I really enjoyed this read this morning, thanks for sharing.
passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-10-23 09:16 PM


wow! what a beautiful scene!
Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-10-23 09:37 PM


reading this left me floating
a nice feeling at the end of the day
to feel so light-hearted

Magnus
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4 posted 2003-10-23 09:55 PM


GR,  a very peaceful and tranquil write,
chock full of imagery...

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2003-10-24 02:45 AM


Even Hughes would be jealous of this poem, your world is so beautiful, I am proud to be in it and part of it, you be the writer my love and i will be the painter of the view you see....through your eyes and my hands..the world will see, feel, taste and hear beauty...

xxxxx love ~ARH
(artwork by Christian Riese Lassen) http://www.lassenart.com/flash.html


True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (10-24-2003 03:47 AM).]

Sunnyone
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6 posted 2003-10-24 03:39 AM


I truly enjoyed this beautiful piece and also ARH's reply...wishing you two much happiness...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

Goldenrose
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7 posted 2003-10-24 04:28 AM


Gentle Spirit..Glad that you enjoyed..thank you...GR..

Dix..Thank you for your kind words of encouragement....Goldenrose...

Midnitesun..Glad to give you a feeling of floating and to lighten your day..GR..

Magnus ..Thank you for your kind words..GR

ARH...You are the reason i can write calmly and beautifuly, you lift my spirit to produce this kind of work my love....thank you...love....Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxx

Sunny...Glad you enjoyed my words and ARH's reply and our happiness...GR....

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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