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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-10-22 11:48 PM

*because i can't write a damn thing

upon an altar
of gleaming white
i lay my offerings

pouring words
in libation to
this virgin deity

but gods and muses
will not be appeased
this day and i

am humbled

..and then one day you find..ten years have got behind you..no one told you when to run..you missed the starting gun..

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (10-23-2003 12:08 AM).]

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

1 posted 2003-10-23 12:07 PM

the first stanza is awesome

" the effect of the lack of effect"
Barrett Watten

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-10-23 12:08 PM

thanks pandonov

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-10-23 03:25 AM

yes, I know this well

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-10-23 09:04 PM

i too know of this
yes

uncomfortabley numb
and i see you moved out of the grass

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2003-10-23 09:07 PM

The entire poem is awesome....Nice job, Raph.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-10-24 06:40 PM

as I am humbled by this offering
*smile*
xxoo

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-10-24 06:43 PM

Well if this is what comes fromn you not being able to write, then you need to teach me

You know this was awesome.
Crystal

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

8 posted 2003-10-25 03:05 AM

I've been doing that a lot lately....visiting the blank page and whomping my temple....or forehead...or both....

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2003-10-25 09:29 AM

we...are the ones humbled...smooches...h

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

10 posted 2003-10-25 07:00 PM

I so know what you mean here...
The stupid blank page just expects so much from us all..!
Well done... I think the muse should certainly be satisfied

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-10-25 07:06 PM

(smiles) Oh Raphael, this is wonderful, sweet friend, even when vintage, your poetry is joyous to behold! (big huggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, may this temple forever be your sanctuary, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Raphael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

12 posted 2003-10-25 09:15 PM

Ahh yes...

I know the feeling well...

loved this!

~Tier

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