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This Time |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
The sun has gone down by the time you came and fetch me by The birds are singing At the morning I was loved again By you This time I swear I won't let you go Because I loved you so I never been in love Before like this Now I know This time is for real My heart won't sink on the ocean shore You shown me the way You showed me light That eyes shine My heart is yours And I bet you you will sure think of the way I treat you I was low and lost But this time You came by And you gave me love That I never had it In my life [This message has been edited by vandana (10-22-2003 05:11 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhVanDana~ I get the feeling that this one just danced down the page for you~ Lovely, hon~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love is a wonderful thing - Very nice, vandana...  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Vandana, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I wish for this love to forever last this time and never again will there be another time you're searching! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
you know its love when you can hand them your heart, and they let you cradle theirs This is beautiful! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
But this time You came by And you gave me love ~*~ Wonderful lines, Vandana! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
very beautiful writing Vandana. enjoyed. |
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