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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-10-22 01:14 PM



You deny me nothing.

Even as I turn
away.

The world spins completely.

Yet the stars are
always...

Waiting.


© Copyright 2003 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-10-22 01:35 PM


So beautiful this is...lovely heart this person has..wow.
Love,
Terri~

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-10-22 01:59 PM


Beautiful Eric!  Absolutely beautiful!
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-10-22 03:55 PM


Eric~
This is tender and beautiful~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Sadelite
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4 posted 2003-10-22 04:11 PM


Eric,
   This is a beautiful tribute that you've given someone.   Awesome thinking.
                       Satelite

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5 posted 2003-10-22 04:44 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I love the starlight glowing in these words, sweet friend, may you forever feel complete and the stars shine everywhere around you and not just in one distant horizon! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

A Romantic Heart
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6 posted 2003-10-23 04:58 AM


Completely beautiful and romantic...as always to be expected...

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-10-23 05:05 AM


that's awesome
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