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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-10-22 11:55 AM


    
In twilight I dream
Images of tomorrow
Arise in the mist....


ok...blame Karilea, she asked me to write something
about twilight.....so here we go,
add on as we go gang and lets make it fantabulous!



It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-22-2003 11:58 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-10-22 11:58 AM




When tomorrow comes
ask not for whom the bell tolls
it's a wake-up call

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2003-10-22 12:02 PM






Wake up to the morn
bathe in serenful moments
breathe deeply of day




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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2003-10-22 01:44 PM



Among the glitter
Soft stars in array glowing
Knowing that I dream~



More Senryu-ie
Than it is a Haiku-ie
But, what the fooey~



~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-10-22 01:51 PM




Sunshine is blameless
Twilight dreams come regardless
Gentle spirits float

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
5 posted 2003-10-22 02:02 PM


+*+*+*+*+
Heaven glows brightly
As spirits rise high in skies
When Earth sojourn ends.
+*+*+*+*+

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-10-22 02:07 PM



An ocean of clouds
rowing home at evening
the hurrying gulls.

Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2003-10-22 02:16 PM






Floating in starlight
silver clouds adrift on sky
in splendor of eve.


[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-22-2003 02:17 PM).]

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8 posted 2003-10-22 02:42 PM



Twi-of-night comes soft
Dreams held aloft now descend
Pillowing my head~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Professor Gloom
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9 posted 2003-10-22 02:47 PM



Betwixt dark and light
Edges of being seeing
Into day and night

just thought I’d toss a few words in

Gloom

inkedgoddess
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10 posted 2003-10-22 03:02 PM


becoming the night
the sun cries for tomorrow
the dawn says a prayer

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-10-22 03:28 PM




+*+*+*+*+
Song of meadowlark
Lulls setting sun to slumber
During twilight hour
+*+*+*+*+

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2003-10-22 03:33 PM


Carried on breezes
Sounds through the stillness of night
Dreams in lullabye

Sunshine
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13 posted 2003-10-22 03:35 PM




Lavender twilight
Feathered pillows beckoning
Lay down weary heart

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
14 posted 2003-10-22 03:36 PM




Luminous silence
only color fills the space
between night and day.

Gentle Spirit
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15 posted 2003-10-22 03:37 PM


Weary hearts resting
under veil of silver moon.
Traquility reigns.

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16 posted 2003-10-22 07:13 PM



She seeking the night
Quiet in restless slumber
Beckoning the dreams~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Martie
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17 posted 2003-10-22 07:17 PM


In the cobalt sky
fly the elemental lights
stars in midnight fly

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18 posted 2003-10-22 07:57 PM




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19 posted 2003-10-22 08:34 PM


Night is only night,
the shimmering stars just stars;
ours is the beauty.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>   ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº>  ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº>    ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
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Gentle Spirit
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20 posted 2003-10-22 08:59 PM


Beauty held in all
brighter than all of the stars
Shining universe

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21 posted 2003-10-22 09:05 PM


Petals fall, recall
lips of lustre, shining eyes
Vortex of lost dreams

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22 posted 2003-10-22 09:10 PM




Again, in night's blue
Stars come out to play in flight
Taking dreams along

Martie
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23 posted 2003-10-22 09:14 PM


Captured in dramma
the page is turned to open
darkness is the star

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in the shadows
24 posted 2003-10-22 10:32 PM





petals relaxing
the flower grins at the night
its workday is done

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25 posted 2003-10-22 10:34 PM


dandelion eyes
eyelashes scattering seeds
through the hazel dusk



Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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26 posted 2003-10-23 06:24 AM




Awaiting sunlight
Emerging from twilight dreams
Images floating

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inkedgoddess
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27 posted 2003-10-23 06:42 AM


pleading with the sun
come gently thru my slumber
whisper rays of dawn

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-23-2003 06:44 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
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28 posted 2003-10-23 07:37 AM


Rays filtering through
awaken to the sunrise.
A new day is born.

sigheyes
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the winds of destiny
29 posted 2003-10-23 07:58 AM


Glorious daybreak
sun rising in morning skies
dreams slowly fading

Gentle Spirit
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30 posted 2003-10-23 09:43 AM


The keeper of dreams
lies in wait of setting sun.
Night will come again.

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31 posted 2003-10-23 12:58 PM



Keep the gentle silk
Of twilight's dreams embracing
Cover me with you~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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inkedgoddess
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Ohio
32 posted 2003-10-23 01:08 PM


just before the dawn
the haze on the horizon
dreamlover fading

littlewing
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33 posted 2003-10-24 07:41 PM


her smiling eye shines
gently tugging heart string to
the place of my birth

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In Your Poetic Mind
34 posted 2003-10-24 07:55 PM


Wake up in the morn
have a cup of java please
add cream and sugar




Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last



[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-24-2003 08:02 PM).]

Paula Finn
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missouri
35 posted 2003-10-27 10:16 AM


Twilights last gleam
ere the moon shows her soft face
and the night things creep.

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
36 posted 2003-10-27 10:25 AM


Sun peaks over hills
and shines upon my suburb
wake the child for school

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37 posted 2003-10-27 10:44 AM



Electric light years
Travel to distant new worlds
Bright stars light the way


"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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38 posted 2003-10-27 10:48 AM




Night shades mystery
Candle's light but grounded star
Someone winking back

Gentle Spirit
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39 posted 2003-10-28 07:56 AM


Morning Java cup
awaken to dawning day.
Seize moments of life.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-28-2003 07:57 AM).]

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40 posted 2003-10-28 11:16 AM



Tea, steeping, fragrant
Highlights holding up the sun
Winter, whispering

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41 posted 2003-10-28 11:25 AM



dusk dims into dark
silent sleepers slumbering
passionate pillows



melt into the soft
whipped cream covered passion dreams
tasting lovers thoughts

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (10-28-2003 11:31 AM).]

Gentle Spirit
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42 posted 2003-10-28 01:29 PM


Lovers thoughts trailing
slow fading in mist of morn
visitor of night

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Rounding thoughts gently
Skimming cream sounds of the day
Layering softly

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44 posted 2003-10-28 03:35 PM


~*~
Softly the layers
Of the sunset disappears
As the moon then shines
~*~

Gentle Spirit
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45 posted 2003-10-28 03:38 PM


Shining in shimmers
Luna smiles brightly o're all
stars sparkle in skies

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-28-2003 03:39 PM).]

Sunshine
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46 posted 2003-10-29 09:07 AM





Look high for the Moon
Cradling begins once more
Phase seeking faces

Gentle Spirit
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47 posted 2003-10-29 09:36 AM



Full moon arises
creatures of the night stirring
the earth awakens

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