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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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Upon this earth awaken my heart what is my soul? but written words; forgotten time at night shadows catch you in layers of light I use to hear their soft whispers every breath every movement such silent weavers {but} this world is not quiet tonight fires are burning the sand is heavy the clocks are loud Another fading of petals will leave this house in shades of solitude {I almost laughed} I watched the moon trace the floor with jaded eyes looking for reason, and thoughts of hope---nothing, light a cigarette, and watch the ashes fall a tapestry with no meaning I sometimes think of you in windows but cant remember the color of your eyes-- holding a mirror close I cant remember who I am-- separated earth and sky realm to realm as if knowing would tear this moment apart don't speak again your words, love should never be hard the wall remains {I layed down and cried} torn Will the wind ever remember the names it has blown in the past with its crutch its old age and its widsom it whispers no this won't be the last [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (10-22-2003 10:30 AM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Greeneyes A soft and poetic lovely read. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
So,so true. Love should never be hard. I think it has it's bumps in the road, but it should never be a struggle to find their heart. It's either love, or it's not. Thanks for sharing. Love, Terri~  [This message has been edited by SharaRose (10-22-2003 10:29 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
holding a mirror close I can't remember who I am-- separated earth and sky realm to realm ~*~ I've seen shimmers like this. More than lovely, Lauren, a  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
holding a mirror close I cant remember who I am-- God Lady L~ you just wrote how I've felt for months....and I cant remember who I am sometimes, like I've lost me....and I try to remember Tracy Lawrence's words "I can be me again...deep down I KNOW I can.... "  It's better than I could have planned.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW!! Just WOW!! Your writing takes my breath away! ~Hugs YOU!~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GreenEyes~ 'I watched the moon trace the floor with jaded eyes' All you pen is so lovely ... this one has such poignancy to it~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 Sad..but oh so good! Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes sad when you can't remember the color of eyes |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Lauren, I know this feeling of not feeling like myself after my heart has been broken since New Years Day, and this whole year has been kind of a somber one for me, so much pressure, so much severity, so much lack of movement! (sad sigh) I send angel hugs your way and hope now your room is like a cathedral and is lit with candles and kyries of loves promise, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Lady Of Light Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 31 |
Oh my! I am going to love Passions, what wonderful poetry I am finding here. This is outstanding poetry. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Thank you all for reading and responding MUWWWAAAHHHSSSS and HUGSSSSSSSSS Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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