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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-22 12:40 PM


waved  

brittle taste
wind waste

lying lips
eyes cold
stipple face

the river’s rust
upon the lust

the touch
the faith
the ritual

afar beyond
the feel of clay
the daze

cinder coil
silent blaze


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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-10-22 12:57 PM


I like this, and it's rhyming scheme.. it flows nicely.
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2003-10-22 04:32 AM


thx
inkedgoddess
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Ohio
3 posted 2003-10-22 06:42 AM


yea,
this took me there
wherever that may be

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-10-22 09:16 PM


This definitly needs a bump, it's fantastic
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
5 posted 2003-10-23 12:32 PM


thx all of you
passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2003-10-23 05:09 AM


pretty cool, short and sweet
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