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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-10-21 07:09 PM


As Lovely As A Cello


She whispered sweet nothings in his ear
that were something to hear and everything
He had ever wanted and needed and desired
flowed through her luscious lips.

And within the pleasure of his fingertips
was the woman he had been waiting for all
of his life and she was everything he had
hoped she would be and then a little more.

She was truly a magnificent sight
and he loved to hear her silky voice,
as lovely as a cello in the middle
of a perfectly romantic night.


JamesLee
October22
2003



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-10-21 07:14 PM



Now that's a timbre worth getting
a splinter over...

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-10-21 07:16 PM


Very lovely James...much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

BluesSerenade
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3 posted 2003-10-21 07:20 PM


Well, why not ask her to play it again.
This was some beautiful music to my ears James!

I for one,  would take it as quite a
compliment to be compared to a cello...

But I know better!  

Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2003-10-21 08:51 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is so lovely and romantic, sweet friend, and may your love forever harp the lost symphonies to you that only goddesses can interpret! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Magnus
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5 posted 2003-10-21 09:21 PM


Nicely done JM,  and add a little bit of
an Hawaiian breeze to this,  and presto!

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
6 posted 2003-10-21 10:11 PM


Lovely.
Terri~

Suetang
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7 posted 2003-10-21 10:17 PM


Hello James

You are such a master with your romantic words which are always enjoyed.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-10-22 08:58 PM


Thank you Sunshine, Enchantress, Blues Serenade, Noah, Magnus, SharRose and Sue for the nice responses...I really appreciate them...James
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