The journey back -- Tiersdin/me duet

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bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

0 posted 2003-10-21 04:45 PM

Midnight approaches with
reminders of how empty this
bed is without your dark head
facing me with heavy lids
awaiting kisses to kindle fires

The shiver that passes in quiver
along my bare reacts more to
lonely's cold than memories of old-
lay your warmth upon this pyre
as I am in dire
need...

A trembling response relays
the intent of midnight's chill --
this body above the covers
leeching heat from the room.
Oh to recall the taste, the taint
of slow, luxuriant touch's
escape, relapsing,
here, with you.

Where do I call to end
the silent war?

I cannot sleep unless replete
with your love,
But I languish here alone in weep.

My love, do not forsake me
Bring near your warmth to
wake me from this death...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-10-21 07:01 PM

Although I feel I know both of your works, still, I cannot tell who wrote what. What I do know, however, is that I would like to see more from the both of you - together.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2003-10-21 07:05 PM

Tier & Mike this is amazing!
I cannot tell who wrote what either..
and I read you both all the time.
Bravo! Please du-et again!
~Hugs to you both~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-10-21 11:37 PM

Good God this is beautiful writing

Tier and Mikey . . .
this reminded me instantly of
a warrior and his love . . .
apart . . . worlds apart
yet keeping that love within

lay your warmth upon this pyre
as I am in dire
need...

amazing lines you guys
Jesus this is just . . .
eternal
xxoo

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

4 posted 2003-10-21 11:38 PM

I love it when you two write together.. it's always amazing.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-10-22 12:15 PM

(smiles) Oh R.T and Michael, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, I can relate to these journies, which can be so difficult just to make it back to ones arms and find solace! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You Both, this is a beautiful duet, yay, God Bless You Both, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet R.T and Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you both!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2003-10-22 12:52 PM

Thanks, everyone.

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

7 posted 2003-10-22 03:18 PM

Thanks all, and thank you too, Mikey.

*smiles*

~Tier

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2003-10-22 05:32 PM

Another wonderful collaboration from you both...please, more would be most appreciated

Enjoyed muchly.

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-10-23 05:18 AM

awesome write!

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