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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2003-10-21 04:18 PM



The Cage-In-Rattle
~*Marge Tindal*~

The cage-in-rattle
awakens the beast
who will not be quieted
lest others forget
Roaring from within
heard through pen
Who is this kitten awakened ?
Ahhh, perhaps her voice bears resemblance
to the strength of the lioness
instinctively protective~
~Roar~

*Just one of those 'find the mountain and scream' days*

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

© Copyright 2003 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
NewEnglandlazurlu
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1 posted 2003-10-21 05:16 PM


This is a true winner and it's going on my fridge! I seem to have more and more of these kind of days!  Hmmmm....

Fabulous!  Huggles, Marti

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-10-21 08:47 PM


such strength....

*s
hugs
M

SmartChick
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3 posted 2003-10-21 09:03 PM


I have alot of those days, Marge.
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4 posted 2003-10-21 09:22 PM


Find the mountain and scream?  Move over,
you have company....  Smile!!!

froggy
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5 posted 2003-10-21 10:16 PM


Sounds like a day i had.
I like this alot.

:-)

Suetang
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6 posted 2003-10-21 10:28 PM


Hi Marge

I loved this.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
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7 posted 2003-10-21 11:46 PM


Dear Marge:  Well I live part way up a mountain.  Does that count?  I sometimes scream anyway!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2003-10-22 09:38 AM



Well, golly jeepers ... it worked !
So, okay ... I didn't find a mountain, but did find a little poetic hill ... one Cherokee yell released it all~
Honest Injun !

Thankee kind folks for bearing with me~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-10-22 10:48 AM


Marge  
You are a wonder of write.

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10 posted 2003-10-22 10:50 AM


enjoyed much Marge~
ethome
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11 posted 2003-10-22 11:32 AM


Aw c'mon Marge that's just your grandaughter waking up things will calm down when you hug her.....

Love the words.....

Eric

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12 posted 2003-10-22 12:58 PM


yep! I can relate
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13 posted 2003-10-22 01:07 PM


Great Poem!
Eric

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14 posted 2003-10-22 04:57 PM


Marge, I enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Betty
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15 posted 2003-10-23 08:27 AM


I really liked this one Marge.
Betty

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16 posted 2003-10-23 09:08 AM


The roaring of the beast! Oh do I not know it well!



~~J

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