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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Truth is found within ourselves surely we must keep in touch and answer honestly to the person we've become a cliche that proves our heart worthy. But where does the truth lie in others can it even be explained or understood is it only a matter of trust or not to trust while sitting on the edge, keeping our fingers crossed. As I pause,the picture remains fuzzy blurring white lies and half smiles like playing dress up,all fancy and full a waltz across the stage until you trip. So like a play on words the message is never fully understood the curtain falls much too soon eluding the truth,to be desired. ~*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bluesy Gal...this says it all! Truth is found within ourselves surely we must keep in touch and answer honestly to the person we've become a cliche that proves our heart worthy. Indeed dear friend.....as always Lori, I enjoy your words so much. [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-21-2003 01:24 PM).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But where does the truth lie in others can it even be explained or understood is it only a matter of trust or not to trust while sitting on the edge, keeping our fingers crossed. I like this write very much, Bluesy Lady... it made me think. *S* And my answer? *S* Time is also an element... people can fool us completely for a while if that's their aim and our guard is down... but however painful the exposure, we do eventually see what and who they are. *S* Here... I see beauty... in both write and heart. *S* |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Truth is found within ourselves surely we must keep in touch and answer honestly to the person we've become a cliche that proves our heart worthy. AFter the last two poems I've written, surely needed this reminder...stunning poetry mi lady! Excellent write |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
"...a waltz across the stage until you trip." The important thing to remember is...Stand up, dust yourself off, and finish the dance with someone who won't step on your toes.  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Truth is found within ourselves surely we must keep in touch and answer honestly to the person we've become a cliche that proves our heart worthy. this alone says it all.. but just for memories sake: let's face it if everyone had to stand in the rain drenched as we were..there would be no hiding any truth *s... funny warm memories you bring back to me tonight.. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) I only wish it was easier to tell the truth from the untruth, like having x-ray vision and identifying where the truth be told! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your heart is always fancy and full, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
So like a play on words the message is never fully understood the curtain falls much too soon eluding the truth,to be desired. funny how we get tricked thinking we find it in another, for a moment or two, only to evade us again, and yes the only truth is truly in own own self we come here alone, we leave here alone, sad but true......make what we can of it all........... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...The truth IS in you...lovely look at it in this poem! Hugs! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Lor... As long as we keep in touch, and finish the dance... How could tomorrow be any brighter? Excellent write. TD |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Mann Bluesy . . you got it right here But where does the truth lie in others can it even be explained or understood is it only a matter of trust or not to trust actually yes and in this lies heartbreak, love, experience, happiness pain and joy . . . learning . . . the hard way always it is what you take that matters and what you leave behind (yes, easy for me to say Miss Bleeding Heart herself over here) *smile* tweets xxoo Hey I love what you did with your picture! (do you do PSP? come visit the little house up there . . .) [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-21-2003 10:49 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Yes, it's always a pleasure to read you, m'lady. Always. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
......Mmmmmm....full and fancy...just like I like 'em..... Except for truth...I like that full and very simple. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Truth is found within ourselves surely we must keep in touch and answer honestly to the person we've become a cliche that proves our heart worthy. Lori, this is a very true poem. We always can know that we can find truth within ouselves....and hope that we can find truth in others. Hugs Ethel |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Truth is found within ourselves Yup, it's within us, so much said Ms Blues and so much to ponder  A wonderful write. Good to read you again Maree. fate is not just |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*shaking head in awe* |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Nicely Done Bluesy~ write me a quick note to Salti_girl@yahoo.com or icq me # 208828719 good seeing ya again! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
me thinks it's sorta like the question "is God real" - faith is all we have, and belief in our personal truth - if we're true to ourselves, always, and begin with faith in others, the loss is theirs if they can not maintain "truth". Thoughtfully written blues.... jwesley |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This place, our internet can harbor so much deceit and untruthfulness. We can only hope that truth prevails here as well as in our relationships and friendships...'cause we all thirst for honesty and truth... Thanx Bluesy, much here in this write... |
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