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Robert Frazier
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0 posted 2003-10-21 12:43 PM


Ivory dream
another tune
waking restlessness
Beautiful ballad
softened to
ease my pain
Lilting minor cords
that blend passion
within my heart
Mesmerizing melody
Moth to flame
Magical notes
of ivory melted
by your touch
So perfect



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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-10-21 12:46 PM


"Magical notes
of ivory melted
by your touch
So perfect"

Exquisite write...so very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-10-21 12:47 PM


very soft
Brad Majors
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Georgia
3 posted 2003-10-21 12:48 PM


well done
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-10-21 12:49 PM



Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-10-21 01:02 PM


~ and your poetry?... "So perfect"


EA

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standing on a shadow's lace
6 posted 2003-10-21 01:08 PM


a lullaby in sweetest key...h
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7 posted 2003-10-21 02:05 PM


Robert~
WONDERFUL penning~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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BluesSerenade
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8 posted 2003-10-21 02:38 PM


Ooooooooo, I loved the ivory touch!
Smooth stuff Robert, you've written a real beauty here.

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9 posted 2003-10-21 03:20 PM


Beautiful ballad
softened to
ease my pain
Lilting minor cords
that blend passion
within my heart



This  is a beautiful ballad of verse.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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