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El_Campeador
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0 posted 2003-10-21 10:56 AM


Parched ground,
Craving water.
Watching a drop
Form,
And then
—drip!—
f
a
l
l
i
n
g

d
o
w
n;

Waiting
With open arms.


© Copyright 2003 Benjamin Graber - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-21 11:00 AM


Ben, I found me opening up my arms as well...

Lovely!


EA

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-10-21 12:15 PM



Enjoyed this, Ben.  Thank you!

Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2003-10-21 12:16 PM


nice form to express the nice thought...

regards
sudhir

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-10-21 12:27 PM


Cool!! I liked this!!!
Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-10-21 12:52 PM


very nice!

good to see you again

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2003-10-21 01:39 PM


Ben~
Delightful format~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

garysgirl
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7 posted 2003-10-21 02:44 PM


This is very good, Ben.
I love the falling effect.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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8 posted 2003-10-21 03:08 PM


Very enjoyed and so glad to see you posting again.
Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-10-21 03:38 PM




(smiles) Yay! Oh Ben, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, I love the pattering of words and visions you create, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ben, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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