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I Call Her Angelina
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I Call Her Angelina |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Have you ever wondered exactly where she goes? Soaring shotgun clouds entrailing tresses of stars blinding your sight She sets her course her own direction sailing home to tip of finger play upon shaking hand within her own she holds fast a smile that playful grin Conjuring words inscribed upon your brain within the matter grey lying in wait for you to process into language [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-21-2003 09:03 AM).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
She is quite lovely, and befits her name ever so well. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hiya Little wing, good to see you and read you this morn!!! Looks like we were on the same wave length today....cause I believe we've both written about the same thing, although, you do it so nicely, and I'm so darned long winded...hehehehhe, oh well? Great poem, postively beautiful concept. Thank you for sharing. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sue, what a beautiful poem this is. And such beautiful images you painted in my mind. I'm keeping this one.  Hugs  Ethel (psssttt!!! I've missed you around here, Little One...) breathe........ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Your Angelina is as beautiful as you are Susie, and this write...pure joy....and thoroughly enjoyed...Hugs gal.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Donna is write...Your Angelina is as beautiful as you are Sue. Wonderful uplifting write. Hugs~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) And your Angelina also loves you ever so much and finds you to be tresses of stars to her, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a true gem, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
and may she always be at your side |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You definitely have a way with words.... Might this have been a reflection of a certain poetess we all know and have come to love? A very cute write, thanx for a smile this eve. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue...You do have a special way...and this sounds so familiar..like you! Hugs! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I so love the process and progression...Angelina! Yes, she is a beautiful bird! Oh Tweets, I am so caught up in your love story! Kiss the mirror for me Susie!  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
nice |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lady *smile* me muse she be thank you Hey Lee, yes we did and no way , long winded? My God your writing speaks volumes . . . mine are just glimpses and yes, we were writing of the same thing thank you Thank you soo much Ethel I have missed you too *smile* LittleOne Donna, my goodness . . so very good to me, I was trying to describe my muse Thank you Thank you Nancy . . . awww I wish I were as beautiful as she is *smile* (wish she would write a lot more too) Thank you Noah . . you know after reading your response I thought that maybe I was even writing of a guardian angel Thank you James aww Michele . . I sure hope so thank you for that *smile* Barry . . My God . . an honor hearing that from you goodness . . and well, my muse you know? she knows better than I *smile* no I wasnt writing of me so much as wishing it were me thank you Martie, goodness . . you guys so so good to me . . . *smile* thank you Hey Bluesy if I kiss the mirror for you will you get on the scale for me? (I dont own one, never will) *smile* That, from you, is so so sweet YOU m'dear are an angel thank you tweets Thanks Raph, I had Jimi on my mind Thanks guys xxoo |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Yes..yes.. I love this! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Susie hon, I knew you were trying to describe your muse... like I said You are as beautiful as she, you truly do write like an angel, she must be an angel... just like you! HUGS you and good morning! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you always have a way about words that leaves me without words |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Sweetly beautiful and touching. Eric |
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