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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-10-21 07:16 AM


Such enlightening characters of nature’s nuggets
Words seemed to look with a passionate
Yearning immersed in seas of adoration
Rain was resting, possessed of a fine honesty
With bold entrance of consistancy, seeking an opening
Listening like a woman reading tea leaves
Guessing what unnoticed forces run between
Seemingly like another world, bubbling with happiness!
Like Moet champagne freshly released
I had been awarded a dream, at the brink of fall’s artiste
Where flowerheads suddenly opened, glittering 10’s of thousands
in the wake of day.
“It takes confidence to lodge perseverance” I thought.

Now….
Most would dismiss such as superstition, but I choose to view these signs as metaphores
Expressions taking great attention, in some ritual for concern
Where all intersects with some other world…here on earth
Honoring such provisos of awareness, working amongst the sounds of
A transparent golden semblance…a devote maternity to mankind,
Somewhat systemetically, tender buttons of verbal portraits and prose

Springhouse of youthful travelors, dining hard, standing
Sentry over provisions of noon, with a picnic of left over pieces
From a new glowing moon, making the night air swirl and swirl…
Immersed within a culture of it’s own, consciously writing in
A way of finest works, classical, a mental expressway of intimacy
With emotional inpacts, this language of mystery!
Gestures, which suggests a mind, marking its own life, amoung a great
Many quiet things.Affinity working diligently in nature
With splashes of insignia and green hillsides touching luxury
Whether offering a meal or not, during this roundtable discussion.

Deliberately incomprehensible, aesthetic frequncies affirmingly accountable
Wide spread endless summers of molten sapphire and pearls
Voices and animations, organic analogs with harmonious sounds
Hearkening to the firmness of composed elements, impulses rising to passageways

These busy moments, profound myriads of ambiance, all through the cosmos profound
Luminous quivers of life, filling eyesight, meeting us…
I approve highly, and am reminded of definition, while embracing this
So called fallacy…superstition
Whatever the dress, the colors, the ascriptions
Whatever it is, or can be, is rather obvious, whispering to our souls…


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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-10-21 07:36 AM


LeeJ,
Yes life is composed of moments.
"Whatever the dress, the colors, the ascriptions
Whatever it is, or can be, is rather obvious, whispering to our souls."
A well painted canvas. Have a good one.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-10-21 09:17 AM


Lee?

*huge smile*

yes but you, m'dear
have painted a masterpiece here

I had been awarded a dream, at the brink of fall’s artiste
Where flowerheads suddenly opened, glittering 10’s of thousands
in the wake of day.

beautiful writing
as always
xxoo

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-10-21 11:11 AM


Lee, thank you for sharing "These busy moments, profound myriads of ambiance, all through the cosmos profound"...

You are a philosopher and poetic muse of Life and Living.


Linda

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Georgia
4 posted 2003-10-21 12:29 PM


Love this
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-10-21 12:43 PM


your muse has been busy I see

love this write, though I hardly ever read the long ones

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