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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2003-10-20 08:57 PM


I had decided not to title this poem.
There's a quietness lying within
the mountains,

beyond every horizon one will find a
vibrant essence, beauty of
snowcapped peaks.

Looking... its like they're
touching the heavens above.
Listening... you can hear the cry
of the Wolf or roar of a Bear.

Watching... you may see a Deer,

Elk or even a Buffalo grazing
in the valleys.

You may even catch a glimp
of a mountain goat or mountain lion.

Its a beauty full
of amazement as one
walks there.

© Copyright 2003 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Mary Ann
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since 2003-04-23
Posts 111

1 posted 2003-10-21 09:59 AM


I like your poem a lot It has a lovely flow..thank you for sharing this...

God bless,

~MA~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-10-21 10:03 AM


"Its a beauty full
of amazement as one
walks there."

~ and this you have conveyed in a manner so full of beauty...


Earth Angel

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
3 posted 2003-10-21 03:24 PM


Thank-you Maryann and earthangel
for the nice comments.
I don't live near the mountains but its how
I see them in my mind.

:-)

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