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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-10-20 09:59 AM

A Silenced Heart

She's over again for this year,
never having met her Knight
yet proxied by many.

Gifted by eyes that could
read the poems in her,
those they could never write, but wished.

A seller of dreams, he was.
Emotions crossing the midnight lines,
a ceiling of verse to look down upon
the bare of her necessities.

A see-through veil,
wanting to be lifted, but
resistance stilling the night
to torture the "face of reality"
losing her reasoning
to believe.

She looks good in shades of the blue,
carries it well, but better in black,
where there are no reflections.
Wearing instead, the absorption of loss.

A silenced heart, vaporizing
before its time.

M

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-10-20 10:05 AM

She looks good in shades of the blue,
carries it well, but better in black,
where there are no reflections.

my dear... I am sure you would look good in anything..or nothing..but what ever you wore, there would always be something to reflect on..

hugs M...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-10-20 10:07 AM

Thank you Ron, I needed that...
hugss
M

My Lady Ollyne is put to rest for another year...taking part of me with her this time.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-10-20 12:30 PM

gah

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-10-20 12:33 PM

I have to agree this brought tears, but it's part of who you are.

Crystal

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

5 posted 2003-10-20 12:53 PM

Hurts to feel this, but you are worth so much more than you are giving yourself credit for. I'm learning about measuring worth, and we are worth so much more than we see with our own eyes. I don't think we ever see ourselves the way other people do. Tears came to my eyes when I read this. Makes me so sad to see these words. Now don't do that anymore..makin' me cry...now where's the hankie? heh...you owe me a hanky. This may seem silly and stupid, but it's what I felt when I wrote this comment. I just write what comes to mind.
Love,
Terri~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-10-21 06:57 PM

I often think that no matter what pain we have endured we are still called upon to do our best each day...for not only do the strong survive but they prosper...James

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-10-21 07:06 PM

I may not understand the all of this,
but I do understand the need
behind it.

Well done, Maureen.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2003-10-21 07:13 PM

Loved the combination and undertones of blue and black Maur~

I have a good idea where this came from,
so faire you are and quite lovely!

Don't you ever doubt it for a second!!!

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2003-10-21 10:34 PM

Hello Maureen

I thoroughly enjoyed this fabulous piece of writing and I love the new picture of you. I hope all is well in your life.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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